Holy shit, guys! This is amazing! To do all this great writing and development work in the span of 2 days is incredibly impressive! The art is super charming, and it all controls pretty well. But I think the star of the show is the narrative design work. Ruari, you have CLEARLY improved as a writer. The information pertinent to the mystery was organized and spread out very neatly. Besides Sheldon and Joe (hilarious btw), all of the characters contributed to the player's understanding of the story and in such a way where the answer, after talking to everyone, still wasn't clear-cut. That may not sound like much, but that's an incredible feat for a collegiate writer! All in all, super charming, very funny, well-written, and marvelously executed. Kudos, you guys. Kudos!
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Holy shit, guys! This is amazing! To do all this great writing and development work in the span of 2 days is incredibly impressive! The art is super charming, and it all controls pretty well. But I think the star of the show is the narrative design work. Ruari, you have CLEARLY improved as a writer. The information pertinent to the mystery was organized and spread out very neatly. Besides Sheldon and Joe (hilarious btw), all of the characters contributed to the player's understanding of the story and in such a way where the answer, after talking to everyone, still wasn't clear-cut. That may not sound like much, but that's an incredible feat for a collegiate writer! All in all, super charming, very funny, well-written, and marvelously executed. Kudos, you guys. Kudos!
there's something bloody dickle about this (CONGRATS THIS IS SO COOL)